Tuesday, 5 May 2020

Our task was to write an acrostic poem of our own choice. I wrote about our pet deer.
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous6 May 2020 at 17:12

    Hi Billie I like Spot shes a nice fawn. I wish I had pet fawn. Does she play? you could all most ride her! Any way have fun!

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    1. Anonymous11 May 2020 at 09:05

      Hi Georgia,
      no she doesn't play, but she runs along the side of the motorbike.
      You can see her next time you come and play.

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    2. Anonymous14 May 2020 at 14:48

      Thank you Billie.

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  2. Mrs B7 May 2020 at 10:20

    Hi Billie
    I love your pet fawn, how long have you had her? Your poem is great. I like the line, When she drinks, Mum rubs her butt.
    Mrs Bayley

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    1. Anonymous11 May 2020 at 08:44

      Hi Mrs Bayley,
      we have had her for about 3 months.
      Mum doesn't rub her but anymore because she is bigger and she drinks her bottle through the fence now.

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  3. Mrs Bennett7 May 2020 at 17:53

    Hi Billie
    A clever poem about a pretty special pet!
    How friendly is Spot Billie? I always imagine fawns would be quite shy but I don't know if that is correct or not?
    Mrs Bennett

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    1. Anonymous11 May 2020 at 08:48

      Hi Mrs Bennett,
      Spot is very friendly and not shy, because we have had her from when she was really little. Other deer on our farm are shy though.

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  4. Ellie19 May 2020 at 10:06

    I love your work, it is awesome, I love animals, even baby deer. My name is Ellie, I am at Kokatahi-Kowhitirangi School.

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  5. Anonymous22 May 2020 at 09:36

    Hi Ellie
    What animals do you have around your
    house?
    From Billie

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