Friday, 20 March 2020

What Is On Sea Shore?

We are learning to use adjectives to add details to our writing. 
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  1. Robyn Shaw21 April 2020 at 05:53

    You have added interest and detail to your writing by using adjectives [describing words]. Would you like to make your own collection and write another poem like this? What could you collect around home?

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    1. Anonymous22 May 2020 at 09:51

      Hi Rob
      I would like to make a poem out of
      ferns and plants.

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  2. Mrs Fisher7 May 2020 at 17:17

    Hello Billie
    I agree with Mrs Shaw, you have made your writing interesting with your very good choice of adjectives. I like how your title is a question.
    I like how you have presented your poem to us. You must have used lots of different tools on your device to create your presentation. Well done Billie
    Mrs Fisher

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